Here is the translation if you can't read it...my handwriting is not the most legible I've ever seen:
If truth be told I do not know much/of life or love, for that begs need/of other godly wisdom that in such:/we cannot know that which we do not bleed/for pain brings things never thought before this/and you learn more than every was held captive/of the heart or the brian that before was missed/ but thought of pain is still not attractive/most wish to be spared from the hurt of his/for to learn of death by deaths foul schemes/ cannot even be what the pained learning is/for death is endless sleep but without dreams./In truth I know not much: I mostly recede/and we cannot know that which we do not bleed.
the first line is one syllable too few and the last two are both one too many, and there are a couple CLOSE rhymes instead of real rhymes, but that's good enough.
the first line is one syllable too few and the last two are both one too many, and there are a couple CLOSE rhymes instead of real rhymes, but that's good enough.
looks nice:) WHat did you get for it?
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I think this is truly lovely. Well done.
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